Black Poetry : UNTITLED(Some days my sun doesn't shine)

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  1. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you spot me
    and are immediately
    drawn to me
    for my humorous nature/wit/sarcasm/intellecutal
    stimulation
    there's a certain happiness
    and overall well-being
    that i exude and you've become
    acustomed to
    as you approach
    our eyes meet
    somewhere in between
    both smile
    and i begin to entertain ur thoughts
    non-stop conversation
    this/that/and the other
    laughter induce tears
    aching side
    exhausted from the good times
    you depart and i remain
    reverting back to
    my serious disposition
    and smileless face
    my mind discusses my emotional
    health and clinical depression
    while i eavesdrop at the door
    i hear someone else approaching
    our eyes meet
    both smile
    and once again
    it's showtime

    ****!!! WHEN CAN I GET A MOMENT?!
     
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    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    we have our days...

    and i understand

    life and its never-ending cycle of cycles

    peace~
     
  3. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    can i have just one???

    thank you for reading this...i was having some issues yesterday...LOL! i'm good now tho!

    LOVE&RESPECT
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    SOMETIME

    WE GET LOST IN THIS WHOLE THING
    BUT WE FIND OUR SELF WELL BY MORNING

    I FEEL YA HERE BIG TYME
     
  5. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    people are just greedy...

    but i'm koo wit it now! u know sometimes ur emotions are just on high because ur girl didn't call...u dropped the last piece of cake before u could even taste it...u can't find ur keys...being nosey u hit ur knee...and to top it off ur hair looks ugly...and then u have peeps wanting u to provide comedic relief...well ****...what u gon' do fa me? LOL! this all came about cause i was sittin' eatin my Lay's bistro style jalepeno and cheddar chips(highly recommended-they're the bomb) and a friend came up and sat down and asked me what was wrong because i was alone and not smiling! what the feezee was i expected to be smiling at my chips? i mean they were good and flavorful and all dat but ****...LOL! just had to get that offa my chest...EXHALE!

    thanks for lendin' ur ear mistah $$RICH$$ by tha way, i got somethin' coming soon for ya to peep...keep dem eyez peelt! :)
     
  6. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    you'll get one

    i mean afterall you

    DP2G




    <DSSNY
     
  7. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo if u have word...

    on when that day is...holla at cha boi, nah mean? LOL! so i can pencil it in!

    yo DSS looks like i'ma be in NYC by december on a permanent basis...CALI what? CALI who? :)

    LOVE&RESPECT
    DP2G
     
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    Dyme,

    I feel ya flow here dawg!!!

    You gettin' up outta Cali afterall huh? I hear ya bro!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
  9. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i was wondering...

    where u were...but i guess u made it out safely huh? good for u...my turn my turn! Cali's too **** slow for my taste!

    LOVE&RESPECT
    DP2G
     
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    Hi Dyme

    I feel you on this one. Just because someone isn't smiling or interacting with others all the time doesn't mean they're not happy. Sometimes we're in deep thought or just need a minute alone to reflect. There are people who feel the need to smile/laugh and be around others all the time. Well sometimes those very people maybe afraid to be alone, because it forces them to reflect on things they don't want to. We feel/show all emotions, no one is all smiles, all the time.

    Although I'm unable to see your smile or hear your laugh. I've felt them through your poetry and our conversations.
    So you go right ahead and enjoy your Chedder Chips. :D

    MadLove:heart: Coco
     
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