Black Poetry : Untitled(*sigh*)

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  1. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    one day in my shoes
    definately filled with blues
    win or lose
    chosen vs. choose
    sorrow so deep
    i call them navy blues
    no light hues
    confusing and confused
    intellect and wisdom
    these i musn't lose
    deliver me good news
    praise the LORD i have you
    thankful that we have
    LIFE!!
     
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    Smoove and G'd Up

    i heard ya'


    nice flow


    pd
     
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    Sometimes things go untitled

    Hey, Feeling this one. Go ahead my Oakland friend! Thanks for posting this one. Needed to hear this one.
    Desert Storm
     
  4. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poetic Delight~ thanks for the read!

    Desert Storm~ Glad u were able to feel it...i fa sho needed to get it out!

    LOVE&RESPECT
    DP2G
     
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    playa...playa...

    i choose to be the chosen
    of the few with a dark-skinned hue
    that's filled with the blues...
    navy blues, i do thank you...
    as i labour in my confusion,
    while wisdom and intellect remains an illusion
    and all i can see,
    while struggling in my own shoes,
    is the morning sunshine...
    and the signs of THE GOOD NEWS.

    THANK YOU.
     
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    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I desperately wish...

    i could flow behind you
    but my
    (words that is)
    have been misplaced
    amidst intensified emotional
    THOUGHT
    and only let me get....
    This far.......


    Thanks for the read

    Love&Respect
    Dp2g