Quiet Poetry Lounge : (untitled)needs a name

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Feb 29, 2004.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    new name: SPOKEN REQUEST

    I cant turn back
    The time..but I took
    this one last moment
    to say I care…..
    my heart never song before…
    and what it feels
    I want to share with you
    But sing it to the world…..
    In this corner of your life
    Not knowing what to do….
    But I know where I stand….
    But I want to sing what I have..
    For the first time
    I have a love of my own..
    Don’t have to share..
    Someone who understands me
    Who truly listens…
    Some one who loves me for me
    Not what I can do for them….
    But as we can do for a whole….
    I cant turn back the time….
    But I can face whats in my life…
    As I love you dearly…
    My heart cries out of joy…
    But I want to sing it to the world…
    In the night as the stars play……
    Our souls are there…
    dancing in the gleaming light
    As our world turns……..
    my love is true
    and my heart sings of you…
    .in a soft hush
    I hold you so dear…
    and I want to sing to
    The world..
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very sweet piece
    sound like a (SPOKEN REQUEST)
    love how the inner beings and
    sweet feeling was speaking out
    tyte emotions in motion here
     
  3. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very sweet poem
    lovely
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very lovely tune, this scribe. Flow on.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OOO, very pretty, sis. And very very sweet.
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$..thanks i am feeling that title....
    thanks for da love and support

    Bluewater...thank you my sista for the love on dis one

    watzinaname..thanks for the support

    gempis..awww thank you sis glad you likes

    Peace yall
    Angel
     
  7. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I read this...and I read it again just to make sure I was correct in saying...this piece is truly the :bomb:
    I do hope you find a title most deserving of this masterpiece.
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    queentswana..thank you so much..
    as for a name lending towards $$RICH$$ title he gave...but thinkin still
    thank you again for replin and the support
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Angel...

    I went back and read $$RICH$$ name for your awesome poem and in my opinion...I think that would be the perfect title :jumping: :jumping: there's something about this "SPOKEN REQUEST" that I like to see over your poem.

    love, love, love that script...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes it has a sweet release to it and fit so well
    i love to see it with such a name but sistah it's
    your choice u fine what fit it best for u
    again i loved this piece it was very very nicely done
    indeed a masterpiece
     
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