Black Poetry : Untitled (my 1st post)

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  1. jazzybelle

    jazzybelle Member MEMBER

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    Something told me to just go for it and not be afraid. So here goes my first post.


    strolling hand `n` hand
    drinking smoothies
    being we
    woman and man
    park bench conversations
    relaxing minds
    stimulating

    sitting
    ``````looking
    ````````````````being quiet
    listening to the rise and fall
    of each others heart
    wondering why we are APART
    but somehow 2GETHER


    jazzybelle
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome Jazzybelle (unique name)

    :wave: :wave: :wave:

    Glad to have you. I'm kinda sorta new (past member of Afronet) here myself. I can see by your scribe that you are going to be enjoyed by many here. You paint so beautifully with words.
    I really enjoyed the scene and felt this poem so well. Keepin scribin!
     
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    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Jazzy gurl this is not your first !!!!
    if it is though >>>Job WELL done !
    welcome ;)
    :p
     
  4. jazzybelle

    jazzybelle Member MEMBER

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    many thanks ladies

    and Natasha you are correct, but it is the first that anyone has read. I feel the love here
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    JB~

    :wave: :D Yes sista -- we welcome you here...this is HOME, so take your shoes off and make yourself comfortable, grab yourself a smoothie and relax behind that keyboard... there's a lotta love up in this house!

    Make yourself at home girl :lol:

    Lovin' your flow on this piece/peace!


    One :heart:
     
  6. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ummmm

    refreshing. Makes me wanna go to a park. Welcome to the boards sis.:)
     
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    jahvandus Active Member MEMBER

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    Welcome Home!

    park stands
    mental
    sounds nature abide
    walks
    upwards thoughts
    your caress to sights
    soothing
    me
    behind tree blushes
    saturating roots with...
    eyes of...
    mango
    pineapple
    strawberry dreams
    with a lil' 5 point
    nurture
    the
    song you sing
    iz
    jasmine



    jahvandus
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    JazzyBelle ... i am so honored that you'd
    come here, give us the pleasure ... of being
    the first to ever have a glimpse of your babies

    know what this means?

    it means you are at home

    thank you Sis

    your baby is beautiful

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  9. jazzybelle

    jazzybelle Member MEMBER

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    jahvandus

    ummm mango strawberri
    pleasures
    whispered underneath
    weeping willow trees
    stolen kisses
    soft caresses

    I love lil' 5 points



    Destee, what babies??????
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sista!

    thank you for sharing yourself with us! You'll find we come early and often to be fed!

    Welcome, you bless us with your presence!


    a
     
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