Black Poetry : Untitled loss

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  1. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This overwhelming urge to cry
    Has come upon me like a raging river
    Tears well up in my eyes
    But they don’t
    No they can’t
    Fall
    I feel such a loss
    All alone in this dark room
    With no one to hold me close
    I know I shouldn’t feel like this
    In such a short time
    You have invaded my heart
    My mind
    My body
    My soul
    I can’t with word or thought
    Describe this feeling of emptiness inside me
    A void that no one else can seem to fill
    Can I live with this ?
    Will I ever find another to fill the space that you left behind ?
    I cannot settle
    For less than you
    You say that
    You are looking for your place in this world
    That you have to step closer to God
    Before you can be closer to me
    You have a journey ahead of you
    All that I ask is that in that journey
    May I walk
    Beside you ?
    Catch you if you stumble
    Applaud you when you take that final step
    Of self
    I ask
    Is there a place beside you
    In your journey ......for me?

    Natasha
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Absolutely...

    Lovely!

    Reas
     
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    sis

    let it flow....


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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Natasha...


    gone & speak my heart for me then!!

    i ain't even mad... 'cause you did it so very
    eloquent-ly! i'm moved by this piece/peace.

    thank You for sharing.

    OneLuv.
    SunShyne~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    YES YES YES!!

    SWEET SMOOOOOOVE AND TYGHT
    FLOW HEAD BABY...........YA TALKING
    IN LOVELY MOTION:heart: :kiss: :heart:
     
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    Natasha,

    We all need space sometimes to find ourselves....the difficult thing is allowing who we love theirs, for fear that space will be filled with something or someone else.....I feel this flow. Thanks for sharing.

    Madd Sistahly Love:heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
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