Black Poetry : untitled just read <-----------------------------------------

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by deep_lyrikz, Dec 17, 2003.

  1. deep_lyrikz

    deep_lyrikz Member MEMBER

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    When i hold in my tragic emotions
    its like a bottle of magic potion
    a motion lotion
    that'll stimulate your brain
    it'll probably make you think your insane
    i hate days full of rain
    i hate brains full of pain
    i wish i could take it away
    i wish i could feel perfect just for a today
    just for a day i wanna let it go
    let you know that's it a place better than this
    forget inditements in need a case of acceptance
    without a face you can relate without a presence
    and relay what you say wiout records or a trace you can give props to a cat you dont from crack or weed ressence
    and we keep forgettin
    that we need to fight for eachother
    at least try to like one another
    I aint say lock down and wife eachother
    just say whats good and dont resourt to have to fight eachother
    help when they need it and I aint even say you had to like one another
    just try to be alright to your brother
    i dont like you but we cool and kind to eachouther
    I think GOD sent me down to teach young brothers
    not to flee or retreat when its a fleet of young brothers
    that got beef over the shoes on his feet
    now mabey its me
    but i dont really care about some cheese
    but i was mad at the fact that they wanted my sneakes
    i just do me and try to keep my peace
    but yeah some idots stepped so i released the piece
    2 sec later he just release his knees
    to da floor he drop and my heart pounded and droped and hit the street
    cause now it was my boy whos dead
    playing a lil prank joke to get at
    just case a nig was gone in the head off a lil of that green

    this is a true story well at least based on one
    Now im not saying dont fight or drink smoke or even stay strapped
    hell i still do but now im a lil less trigga happy and a lot more focus on my goals and dreams
     
  2. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SPEAK!!!!!1

    you speak deep youngin.....
    you on tha right path...dont let tha world bring u down ,like u sed...
    i'm feelin ya vibe kiko......life is too short to hate...
    keep doin u.....

    onelove............
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very deep indeed speak on
     
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