Black Poetry : Untitled(incomplete)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thatgirl74, May 12, 2004.

  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This actually started as a collab with some one special who I haven't seen in a while I wanted to put it out there anyway. It is really incomplete but maybe one day we will get tofinish it.



    How can I make him realize
    that he is all I need?
    It never really mattered to
    me about monetary things.
    The long talks we have
    the nights up making plans for
    our forever. How come he feels I need
    flowers to make me see
    that he loves me
    more than eternity?
    Doesn't he know that his touch
    is more to me
    than any flower or card would be?
    just to hear him whisper my name
    or to look deep into his eyes
    sustains me I want to show him how
    he deserves
    to be loved.
    That no matter what his past may hold
    there is a future for him here in my arms.

    I wish you would allow your self to be loved
    and cherished the feel the way you love and cherish me.
    I need you to
    feel the same amount of happiness you give to me
    Can't you see in my eyes the love reflected
    from your heart to mine
    How am I going to make you see that
    you have and will always be all I need?
    I want to love you with out reason
    to envelope you within my soul, kiss you
    deeply with my heart and give you a
    part of me to keep with you always
    Because you are more than a part of me.
    And I know that I am more than a part of you.
    Our souls are linked in a way that is unexplainable .
     
  2. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: I likes...........please finish....nice flow :spinstar:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey, this works very well without the collab, glad you dropped this. Being connected but not knowing how, liked the way you flowed these thoughts.
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful expressions...
    yes...please finish this peace
    ...love is always worth completing
    I'll be watching out for it... :toast:
    nice work!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte flowing here bring on da rest yesssssssssssssssssss!!!!
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love to continue. Yearning to complete with partner. LQQking to see if it will happen.


    Thanks for the love every one .
     
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    ONce again nice piece, where did he leave off at?