Black Poetry : UNTITLED II. (an acrostic)

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  1. garlicsalt99

    garlicsalt99 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And yes, I'm a connoisseur ... of what, you'll have to read

    UNTITLED II.

    Pushing though pulsing parts that throb with satisfaction
    Undergoing orgasmic spasms cause by repeated piston-like action
    Secreting a sexy sensation that is warm and liquid smooth
    Serving as the balm for my sexual healing - to satisfy and soothe
    Yielding to fitted flesh as it holds my unmentioned appendage
    Complementing our gender pair of his and hers, in a manner that’s verily vintage
    Over-cumming from over-stimulated glands that keeps your juices flowing
    Nether regions agitated to excitement with unsaid actions that are ongoing
    Natural is the intimation with which we find ourselves intertwined
    Ongoing since the first man and woman got together in the beginning of time
    Intermingling flesh that moves as the earth does, with every move that we make
    Succumbing to ecstatic sensations which causes your body to quiver and quake
    Suctioning is your sanctuary as I move in and out
    Enamored with each stroke that I take, which makes your labium puff and pout
    Under the influence of vulvar vulgarity, from which your lower parts sing
    Reveling in the mouth of your cavern, for I’m a connoisseur of such pretty things

    Written by: K-JiO
    © 2008
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what more can be said here

    Pushing though pulsing parts that throb with satisfaction
    Undergoing orgasmic spasms cause by repeated piston-like action
    Secreting a sexy sensation that is warm and liquid smooth
    Serving as the balm for my sexual healing - to satisfy and soothe
    Yielding to fitted flesh as it holds my unmentioned appendage


    This was awesome and said so much great read bruh !
     
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    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And what a beautiful thing it is...
    This is some hot ish here poet
    Diggn this fo sho!
    My mind wondering like a mug now...
    towels anyone?
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow...

    You seem to be a master at it... acrostic poetry that is.:)


    Very nicely done, well!



    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    A message within the message....
    I feel ya...I feel ya...
    I luv the way you do what you do.


    Much Luv
     
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