Black Poetry : Untitled I.

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  1. garlicsalt99

    garlicsalt99 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The following is an acrostic, and though it's untitled, the title itself is in the acrostic. Click http://www.gspoetry.com/untitled-i-erotic-poems-298107.html to read the rest. Enjoy

    UNTITLED I.

    Let me make my point to you in four words or less
    Evading nothing … honest and up front, it is to you that I confess
    That I’m feeling something familiar, and on my mind you are impressed
    … come to think of it, the point that I’m making is more of a request
    Matching wits with your sexy side - a challenge, undertaken
    Embarking on a tour of tasteful taboo - a quest that’s unmistaken
    … and yes, actions speak louder than words, but words last forever
    … actions indicated by certain verbs - I like words because they’re clever
    Fornicating thoughts make their way past my lips
    Undressing you with a communiqué, as I stroke you with my fingertips
    Calculating your response to my four word inquiry
    Knowing we both want to indulge in a familiar feeling that lives in infamy
    … pausing, yet again as I grip my knuckles with my teeth
    Yearning for you to disrobe so I can see the real you underneath
    Oscillating between feeling of infatuation, to all out lust
    Unencumbered by shyness, fulfilling this imperative is a must

    Written by: K-JiO
    © 2008
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man u really said something here that stick to my mental
     
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    garlicsalt99 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello to you $RICH$, a message within a message. Those for words have been stated since the first man and woman got together. Thanx for the read
     
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    gsalt:
    A message within a message.
    I got your message BOTH of them. lol
    Have I ever told you how much I truely
    enjoyed reading you. You always take me
    there..and I never need and luggage when
    I go. Here's to you and your outstanding pen.:toasts:

    Much Luv
     
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    Oh, i'm diggn the way this vibe
    a sticky situation of feelings within
    On the cusps of love/lust
    been there done that
    what's next, complete failure
    or fullfillment of love/lust
    interesting post poet
    Enjoyed the flow...
     
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    4everluv ... let me give you an internet hug

    Rashad ... Thank you for reading my first attempt at acrostics. There will be more
     
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    I likes this a lot!

    Your delivery was well received and I look forward to the next.


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    Garlicsalt...

    A clever, creative....MASTERPIECE!

    I loved the flow of this.....:sand:


    epiphany:heart:
     
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    truth or dare baby

    it's the takeover

     
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    The many layers of your writing poet, it boggles the mind. Much enjoyed, as always.
     
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