Black Poetry : Untitled - (hope I haven't already posted this one)

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Just a simple flow.... hope you enjoy :book:


I beg of you, to feed me your thoughts -
dish them to me like a genie to a king -
keep me tantalized with the fruits of your mind -
I dip into you like you're my chocolate fondue -
You let me love you with no regret...
Keep on feeding me until I grow phat
With the lust of your beautiful nature
I beg of you miss can I please overtake you
Can I taste da flava of the beautiful makings
of the body which holds this oh blessed creation
Let the introduction of your love and my tongue happen with no hesitation
I put your passion on my tongue and make it melt slowly into your being
I want to change your train of thought from me giving to you needing
Slow penetration into a whole new nation has subdued your waitin
Pretty butterfly kisses is what your soul has been missin
And with your permission I generously replenish
We've started this two step and now it's no quittin
Your juices they flow like a soft summer's rain
This steady tasteful pace I'm trying to maintain
Our bodies pulsate and catch the same rhythm
Our fires are raging and the tempests are shaking
My temptress keeps me on my P's and Q's
with the sensation she gives me it's hard to refuse
Our heartbeats and desires are suddenly infused
Into one - by now my emotions are completely subdued
By the only one that can control this frequent need of you
My fire blazes in me deeply
You are my everlasting amenity
More than just a precious jewel to me
I wish to lay here forever present in your glory
To refuse any second of it is pure blasphemy
These recollections of love I will always remember lividly
Because what you do to me is unforgettably…….
Wonderfully….
Definitely quintessential lyrical beauty

:heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
 
so happy to read you again...

and no...you haven't posted this one...I think I'd remember it... :spinstar:

this was so wonderfully crafted...with a delicate blend of
divinity...and passion
I love the way you subtly ask for permission yet...the undertow
beneath these beautiful currents of stanzas...paint a picture that
says you have this love in the palms of your hands...
and the ending...was like the final brush stroke placed upon
a beautiful painting...

These recollections of love I will always remember lividly
Because what you do to me is unforgettably…….
Wonderfully….
Definitely quintessential lyrical beauty

don't mean to go on and on...but you've wowed me...what can I say... :sand:
 

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