Black Poetry : Untitled - (hope I haven't already posted this one)

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  1. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just a simple flow.... hope you enjoy :book:


    I beg of you, to feed me your thoughts -
    dish them to me like a genie to a king -
    keep me tantalized with the fruits of your mind -
    I dip into you like you're my chocolate fondue -
    You let me love you with no regret...
    Keep on feeding me until I grow phat
    With the lust of your beautiful nature
    I beg of you miss can I please overtake you
    Can I taste da flava of the beautiful makings
    of the body which holds this oh blessed creation
    Let the introduction of your love and my tongue happen with no hesitation
    I put your passion on my tongue and make it melt slowly into your being
    I want to change your train of thought from me giving to you needing
    Slow penetration into a whole new nation has subdued your waitin
    Pretty butterfly kisses is what your soul has been missin
    And with your permission I generously replenish
    We've started this two step and now it's no quittin
    Your juices they flow like a soft summer's rain
    This steady tasteful pace I'm trying to maintain
    Our bodies pulsate and catch the same rhythm
    Our fires are raging and the tempests are shaking
    My temptress keeps me on my P's and Q's
    with the sensation she gives me it's hard to refuse
    Our heartbeats and desires are suddenly infused
    Into one - by now my emotions are completely subdued
    By the only one that can control this frequent need of you
    My fire blazes in me deeply
    You are my everlasting amenity
    More than just a precious jewel to me
    I wish to lay here forever present in your glory
    To refuse any second of it is pure blasphemy
    These recollections of love I will always remember lividly
    Because what you do to me is unforgettably…….
    Wonderfully….
    Definitely quintessential lyrical beauty

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    so happy to read you again...

    and no...you haven't posted this one...I think I'd remember it... :spinstar:

    this was so wonderfully crafted...with a delicate blend of
    divinity...and passion
    I love the way you subtly ask for permission yet...the undertow
    beneath these beautiful currents of stanzas...paint a picture that
    says you have this love in the palms of your hands...
    and the ending...was like the final brush stroke placed upon
    a beautiful painting...

    don't mean to go on and on...but you've wowed me...what can I say... :sand:
     
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    If you did post it before, I certainly have no problem reading this one again and again. This line just made me flinch, just something about it..."Let the introduction of your love and my tongue happen with no hesitation".....But the entire piece was bursting with lines that were filled to the brim with passion. Wow.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaa sistah tyte drop love reading u
    keep the ink flowin
     
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    :jawdrop: I am luvin this, girl! So very dope to read you again. Flow on! :spin:
     
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    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    angelic, watz, $$RICH$$, and gempy....

    :thanks: for your support! You all make me blush! :blush:

    Some good sugah for your good vibes!! :kiss:

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    likewise my sis.........keep it coming flowin
     
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    :grouphug: WHERE U BEEEEEEEENNNN??? :grouphug:

    this flow was so sexyyy!!!:hot::blush:
     
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    WELCOME BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Its great to read you again sista and what a way to come back :)
     
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    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SwtT, Triniti............

    HI YOU GUYS!! :unity:

    I Missed you too!! :kiss:

    thanks for the :heart:

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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