Black Poetry : Untitled Haiku

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Oct 28, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Soon our road will end
    And though love lasts forever
    So slowly we walk

    BE
     
  2. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you walk so slowly

    savouring every kiss, every touch, every look, with every step that is taken...

    holding on and hoping that the end will never come..

    K
     
  3. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ahhhhhhhh!!!

    What tenderness of words in this well written haiku. While reading this haiku, one sees a unique picture of commitment and singleness of heart.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    The heartbeat of love

    BE....... walking slowly making it all last
    u write dem words now!!!;)
     
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