Black Poetry : Untitled(GoodNight)!!!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by DymePlaya2g, Jul 26, 2002.

  1. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    11:21pm and I want to die
    not peacefully...
    but a tragic death
    BIZARRE/ VIOLENT/ GROTESQUE
    at the hands of
    at the hand of, ME
    so immediate notice is taken
    and normalcy is disrupted
    and never fully returned to
    because the status quo was raised
    and normal isn't
    and probably never was...
    a deathless
    murderous death
    with my face
    brown eyes
    and called my name
    death with a heartbeat
    erratic and hostile
    mUmBLEd
    frenzied speech pattern of
    self-righteousness
    is uniquely ingenious
    A death to summons instant rumors
    and forced high-octive whispers
    about suppose foresight of a troubled youth
    because you know,
    "THAT boy always did seem a little strange if you ask me!"
    a type of death that fascinates
    and inscribes fear
    in the minds of anyone who knew HIM
    that know ME
    the man formerly known as the man
    seen as the boy
    but never formally known as a man
    death that sustains its focused energy on
    shining positive light
    on a being often overlooked
    affirming neglect that has long since
    been obvious and imminent
    flamboyant but monochromatic tales of,
    "I remember one time..."
    or
    "He used to always..."
    or
    "He was the kind of person that..."
    yeah,
    good reflection
    not great or excellent
    because I have to take my own life
    to achieve it
    eyes closed and hands folded neatly
    on my chest
    as you STOP/ SOB/ PROCEED
    while I retreat to dreamscapes
    of seascapes
    sensuous loving rape
    of a black boys psyche
    love and life
    don't even like me
    they don't even like me
    12:04am
    another dayto **** the world
    and blow my own d*ck!!!
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I see you back with a vengeance!!!! Tight flow as usual!!!!
     
  3. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DYME

    ummm hummm what Bishop said




    One
     
  4. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well uhhh...

    Yeah! Killa Flow!

    Reas
     
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    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bishop~UbZoRbShUn~Reason

    WHADDDDDDDDDUP Y'all?!

    thanks for takin' a sec to check me out...more to come...

    Love&Respect
    DP2G