Black Poetry : untitled for now

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Not far away but right there
    I sit……
    Lookin in the north
    From the north-east of things….
    I feel your glow as we begin to grow…..
    And enfold as one no longer two……
    -------------------------------------------------------
    Feel the essence of me…
    Breath thy air I share…
    Hold me close
    And never let me go…..
    For I am thy rose…….
    Unto thee I come….with no doubts
    And no worries….release
    your emotional stress..
    as I take hold of your hand
    the
    flowers begin to
    Bloom..
    Briskly with color as they come alive…
    In da skies birds sing and fly so free as
    Thy gates of heaven opens its doors…
    I of you and you of me….
    …forth
    Our hearts dance in thee
    ball room …..of romance….
    Colors of purple and gold
    Floats thy air….
    Feel thy essences of me unto you
    As one…….we become…
    so free and alive…
    A vibe only we can share….
    Upon thy wind our love will flow….
    Starz dance and the moon
    takes its bow..
    As the night wind blows..
    interlace in us….
    As you touch my lips
    and hold my heart….
    As my love is overcome
    With joy……
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was scribe from heart and joy
    very very nice drop sistah .....wow!!
    say it all let it be heard
     
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    I'm there baby, you've taken me!
     
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    You've painted such a pretty picture.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fam i was to sure of this one..
    thank you for da love and support on it....
     
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    " Starz dance and the moon
    takes its bow..
    As the night wind blows.. "

    A angel after my heart. :D Was it raining warm droppletts..
     
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    as sick as i felt reading this,yearning for tha feeling,i still enjoyed it nonetheless.....this was beautiful.....your words are felt souldeep....~1~
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HODEE....thanks glad you enjoyed...happy holidays

    LURK .....lol thanks fo da read..glad ya did like
     
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