Black Poetry : untitled for now....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your on my mind and hurt….
    Not tryin to find a lover
    But only a friend….
    Didn’t look for this….
    But it is here…..
    You got me feelin…
    The love flow…
    all I can say…
    Is I tried my best
    Not to let you in…
    Now your there….
    No clue of what to do…
    Spent all my life holdin
    Back of what I know
    Of love…..
    Hurt
    And pain…
    Goin on with
    Betrayal….
    Profound in all I have
    Encounter….
    So I lock down…
    My heart and my emotions…
    Now I have….
    But didn’t think I could or
    Would let go
    As I have….
    Tryin not to let you in…
    But now you’re here….
    My wings have spread
    Now I am in full bloom
    Of you….for you…
    The extreme bliss
    Of my being….
    You have captured apart of me
    No man have….
    My pen writes this for
    You…
    My heart feels it…
    And my soul have released it….
    Wasn’t looking for a lover or a mate…
    Just a simply friend….
    But now I have you….
    My soul mate….
    My best friend
    It is so wonderful….
    To feel the way I do….
    Now I give you this
    On paper….to let you know…
    I LOVE YOU…
    ....blkangel thang....
    :kiss:
     
  2. POETIC RAPTURE

    POETIC RAPTURE Active Member MEMBER

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    I just love this. Just because you're not looking
    doesn't mean you can't find.
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is beautiful Blkangel. Very sweet
     
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    Great flow, mzblk! Like this a lot.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime we don't look for love
    it fine us in the funny way
    and the walls we use to keep it out
    somehow fine a crack and seep right in.
    nice felt flow ....da love can be strong!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all for reading....
    and i guess it found the crack.....
    coz its there....
     
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    love have it's way to enter
    we never know how it get in
    but the heart & emotion & feelings say hello to it
    and it's in , love is powerful
     
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