Black Poetry : Untitled for now...any suggestions welcomed

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  1. imoonlitskies

    imoonlitskies Member MEMBER

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    Untitled

    You
    Secured a place on my purple heart that is
    Beautified by your essence
    Crafted to exactness
    Strand by strand
    The perfect embodiment
    Like beads meticulously strung together on a string
    Color coordinated to match
    Connection like perfection; twin souls
    The light that burns continuously
    Through the blackness of the still night
    The constancy of this capricious life
    Bonded by unseen rope
    Knitted flawlessly with a grandmother's touch.
    Through the blue, the grays, the reds and the yellows
    Time is on our side
    Sit down…
    Stay.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A captured audience are we.

    Wonderful write!
     
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    tzevi1278 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'd call it completion. either way this was a beautiful piece of poetry. i enjoyed the read. peace

    Lyr1c
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!!!

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the loving house u found
    welcome from above as i bless this some love
    happy to have u in flow to share love & get loved
    tyte poetic drop continue ....... :hiya: :juggle:
    :spinstar: :new: :spinstar: :spin: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
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    Such a lovely read with precious images. Welcome to destees, make yourself at home poet!!!!
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi and welcome to the poetic stage,
    this is a wonderful piece poet, looking for future pieces.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    now that i've welcome u in
    this flow sound like it can be called
    ( image of two hearts )
     
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    Amazing work, poet. This is such a beautiful piece.
     
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