Quiet Poetry Lounge : untitled fo now....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Nov 10, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Controlled dark in sight
    Where the light went out….heart of
    steal melt and the walls all fell down..
    tryin ta makin in dis cruel world..
    hopin it get better in time.
    .but it leaves behind the blind…
    tryin to make my mark but seems that one wall
    stills stand unable to move…
    so I wonder what am I tryin to give
    when no one seems to see....
    whats in da heart..
    so what am I tryin to give..
    many dreams is what I have
    broke and vanish as
    I stand out side…
    Covered in ice….
    Blackhole grows as the days pass..
    Tryin ta confirm whats the action…
    Just being me…stayin tuue I know its all
    A test for me..
    Tell me what am I tryin to see…
    When its no purposes…
    The light just went out and the heart just die..
    Makin it on a dream..that sum how left in the nite..
    I am who I am to be blackangel you see…
    Full of hope a rare rose….a pot of gold…
    :toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt piece .....
    flow on poetess express
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fo da read... :toast:
     
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