Black Poetry : Untitled flow

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  1. ZaKiYa

    ZaKiYa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When I look in the mirror I see peace and love
    But then I also see the other side of love …
    Covered in red and riddled with resentment
    I wonder as whine
    I whine as I wander
    Without the realities of satisfaction
    Anger is my passion that left me abandoned
    Straight from the cradle to the grave
    I cry as I try to no avail
    In the aftermath of my death
    And the travesty of my life
    I cry no tears I see no years
    Life is gone
    Life is done
    Without a whisper or win
    My life was taken …just as it began
    Quick, easy …1 . 2. . 3 in and out, roll over and I’m done
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well posed !
     
  3. ZaKiYa

    ZaKiYa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks

    it was just a quick freestyle while sitting here at work without a darn thing to do.
     
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