Black Poetry : UNTITLED (Feelings)

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    UNTIL THEE END OF TYME I FEEL IT 4 U
    MY FEELINGS OF LOVE IS IN U
    MY DREAMS OF HEART IS YA SOUL
    MY LIGHT IS THE JOY U POSED
    THE WARM WHISPERS BE OF VOICE
    U SPEAK IN PRINT
    I LOVE U WITH HONORED FEELINGS

    NOW I STAND BESIDE U IN YA MIND
    AND I VISION YA BEINGS

    ( HOW BEAUTIFUL U R )
    FEEL ME AS I OF U
    AND BE WIT ME AS I AM IN U
    I TASTE A PIECE OF U IN EVERY
    BITE SO I JUST NIBBLE AWAY

    BEFORE I FLY I SCREAM YA NAME
    WIT HIGH FEELINGS AND MAD LOVE
    ****! I WANT U SO
    IF I COULD I WOULD !
    U KNOW.......................
    $R
     
  2. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NOW I STAND BESIDE U IN YA MIND
    AND I VISION YA BEINGS

    That's a beautiful visual $$RICH$$, and I can see you now smiling that beautiful smile, stretched out on ya mental afghan poised with pad and pen. Continued flow poet.


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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    YES AS I SEE VISION U I STAND PROUD!!
    THANK U BABY....
     
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    Simply Be...

    ...autiful. You are, truly, the master of sentiment. *Baskin' in the RICHNESS*
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    O~MY

    WHEN WE SPEAK OF BEAUTY
    I GET MY MAPLE~X SYRUP OUT
    AND LICK MY CHOPS....THANX
     
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    Lovin the intensity of this piece....
    Mad visions of a brilliant poet...

    8th!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    AND

    THE SWEETEST EMBRACE OF A LOVELY QUEEN
    THANX 8th GRACEFULLY...
     
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    loving your work

    with intensified feelings!
     
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    ummumm

    Good!!! Can i get some dhat!!! I'm feeling it...:)
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And I'm feeling....

    the SoulurN2!!
    Nice prose - brotha...
     
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