Black Poetry : Untitled Experience

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can you picture our expression
    as we set our inhibitions free?
    As we cautiously disrobe with anticipation,
    can you see that naked vision of we?
    Can you hear the music you bring
    to my ears, did you catch that melodic song?
    The smooth jazz riff of a tenor sax, and the
    silky voice of Luther crooning along...
    Can you experience, me?
    I am asking you to use
    all your six senses
    as we step past the uncertainty
    and over the defenses
    Can you experience, me?
    Can you feel the warmth of the sun
    as it kisses the moon?
    A lunar eclipse of our thoughts
    could merge before our reality... soon
    Will you taste the honey laced elixir
    as it drips from my mind
    as you savor that unique blend
    that remains to be one of a kind?
    Can you experience, me?
    While our imaginations run wild
    thru the fields of lilacs and jasmine
    does the intoxicating aroma allure you
    as it lures you unencumbered from within?
    When the sixth sense resulting from two
    pairs of third eyes continue to show
    that somehow, we just, know
    Can you allow yourself to simply be?
    Can you allow yourself
    experience, me?
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Watz,

    Ironically, as I was reading this, im listening to forever, for always for love. Your poetry brings a freshness to all minds and streches the mind .....


    Forever lovin your poetry,
    SwtT
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sweet post as i drift through it smoothly........i can vision it and hear it
     
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    Yes, SwtT, that Luther was something else, wasn't he? And your response...I just really don't know what to say, only to tell you that you humble me, and I truly thank you for your words sis.
    Thank you Rich for letting me know that you can vision and hear my words brotha.
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    i am so glad i keep going back beyond the front page...to things i've missed.
    I almost missed this one..
    When one understands that not only the body but the mind plays an important part in experiencing...then release is total...
    ....this piece weds it all....
     
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    Keita Kenyatta going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Woman, now you know we gone have to do a collab together...you flowin all like that! But if we do I'm going to make you reach deep cause I know it's there! Great work!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Deepy thank you for saying that I blended that mind body connection to your liking, and thank you for going beyond page 1. Appreciated.
    Keita, thank you for your kind words on this. A collab? Well, hopefully I'm up for that brotha, I'm honored that you would consider it.
     
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    Keita Kenyatta going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    That was some serious work !!! The stuff that makes you go DAAAAMMMMN ! :)
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I certainly am humbled my brotha. Thanks a million Keita.
     
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    sista your words are powerful and the lesson we learn, in order to learn we must listen, the logic of learning. continue to teach my sister warrior, many run from wisdom, and many dye in darkness, the living tomb becomes a pleasure.
     
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