Black Poetry : UNTITLED EMOTIONS

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  1. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    The chaotic exploration
    Of thoughts in the dark
    Is the causation
    Of reflection of
    What I feel in my heart

    The realization
    Of the sensation
    An idea
    Of making love an art….

    Is the

    Infliction
    Of confusion
    Where within.... the battling starts

    But still
    I’m still
    Because
    These are my emotions

    I never thought
    Of her in this way
    But I must have
    Because I noticed myself
    Noticing her

    In the way that
    I wanted him to
    Notice me
    Her androgynous
    Qualities made her
    Every aspect of he
    And I knew
    She could be
    Whatever,
    Without labels
    And still exist
    In this oppressive reality

    But still
    I’m still
    Because
    These are my emotions

    The invidious nature of others
    Was well defined
    In my consideration of
    Straight forward
    But crossing the line
    Into her world
    With no regard
    For theirs
    They wanted her
    But couldn’t understand
    What we share

    But still
    I’m still
    Because
    These are my emotions

    The fact
    This catharsis
    Is the exact
    Expression
    Of admittance that
    I find her attractive
    Because removed from
    The animalistic syndrome
    Of an act of nature
    Accepted by the mass
    Of animals
    I find myself exploring
    What she ponders in her being
    And what I admire most of all
    Is that it’s GOD I’m seeing

    But still
    I’m still
    Because
    These are my emotions

    For she is
    A catalyst
    For something divine
    And in time
    I stop time
    To define
    What they try to define
    Within their
    Own ignorance
    And self righteous
    Judgments
    Of what they
    Never explored
    And do not know

    The deepest levels
    Untouched
    The non existence of gender
    In spirit is real
    Because she insights love in my flow

    But still
    I’m still
    Because
    These are my emotions

    How can anyone ever
    Tell me I’m wrong
    When they wallow
    In their own insecurity
    When I conceptualize
    Thru my own eyes
    What feels right and good
    Maybe it’s jealousy
    Which spawns
    From their own in-ability
    To be free

    But still
    I’m still
    Because
    These are my emotions

    Her smile
    Her style
    Her swagga appeals
    To the parallels
    Of self expression
    Of something
    The same
    While we remain
    So in different
    But I’m persistent
    In the reality of my being
    From this beginning
    Of a new yet old
    Type of self
    Ammend
    Cause the world
    Label’d her “girl”
    But that’s not real
    Cause I have always
    Been attracted to men

    But still
    I’m still
    And really
    These are OUR
    Oceans of emotions
     
  2. truetothecause

    truetothecause Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As I read I was thinking......bout EVERY ONE OF US Women (and probably men) say the same things to themselves....

    and then you said:
    and I felt the points of connection I think we share


    M.E.

    :hearts2:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaa point made and taken as i relate
     
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    I have not commented as of yet on any poetry until today. This was very well written. Great Job!
     
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    That's powerful.. alot of emotion in that.. I didn't get the full thrust of it
    until I went back and read it out-loud..
     
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    All I can say is once a revelation hits

    And you become aware of a hatred and phobia that probably predates any other arguments of choice

    you grow, and I have

    to a greater overstanding of what love is

    it's a bond where two agree to transfer their essence or being to the other

    and since this type of love is of the spirit it knows of no gender, no color... it's recognizes the ALL, and that's it

    I'm really pissed about the inflicted shame of the self righteous

    And I'm really disappointed at the acceptence of it

    Much love, peace, honor and respect
     
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    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    love is love :)
     
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    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    my humble thanks, Sister Surfergyrl

    Much love
     
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    You have a great mind

    Did it appeal more to your spirit, or did you get a physical vibe???
     
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    very well written also enjoyed reading this poem as well
     
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