Black Poetry : Untitled dedication!

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  1. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    staring at the page
    your letters appeared
    as black stars on a white sky
    and the constellations
    gave explaination to
    the what
    the why
    and to the who
    you've become
    while traveling a road
    well traveled
    not alone
    but lonely
    because
    the something
    the someone
    is sometimes missing
    somewhere amongst
    the clouds
    competing for space
    in the black sky
    as white stars
    and in the blue sky
    transparently not apparent
    but apparently
    still a part of
    the heaven of you and
    the heaven of she
    the heaven where we
    imagine being watched over
    and looked out for
    from then
    until now
    beyond the after and when
    you remember the remembered
    cherished for creating your belonging
    and longing
    to hear
    to see
    to share
    and be
    what you were
    when they were here
    on your way
    to the woman
    you are now because of her but
    without her the journey aches
    and the candle light flickers in unison
    with the twinkling stars you were in her eyes
    that you eyed together
    before they returned
    to them
    and the sky
    to watch from a distance
    and wait for you to
    give birth
    and
    name your namesakes
    and honor your successes
    in her physical absence
    gleaming
    beaming
    streaming
    Ray-ess of light
    your black star forms many shapes
    on this white sky
    to express your life of purpose and beauty
    filled and fulfilled
    but moreso feeling
    it's way to pure greatness!!!



    Love&Respect,
    DP2G
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well dedicated ...love the flow of this and where it took me,
    happy to be reading you again welcome back home.
     
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