Black Poetry : Untitled; but in thought...

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have got to pace myself; accordingly~
    Racing myself in a relay
    towards love... unsure
    of the course's destination,
    not certain if you would
    be there waiting for me
    at the finish line~

    I am unable to contain my
    feelings for you so I obtain
    a pace maker to regulate
    and stabilize my heart beat
    when we are together...

    I don't want to be lost in
    love, unless I'm sure you'll
    be there to find me -
    your guiding light leading
    me directly N2 ur Soul

    I have some doubts that come
    with not knowing the depth
    of your emotion and I wonder
    if I swim vicariously in your
    sea...

    How much do you care? Do you
    care enough for me to stop
    reciting -- 'you're seeing
    someone else'-- to recognize
    the extent to which you've
    now become fully involved with me?

    Realize the time we've spent
    - All Up In Love -
    so much that we could not
    visibly see "the finish line"...

    In conversation, my question -
    questioned questions, they sat
    around discussing multiple
    choice until A, B, and C
    picked D - to give the
    final answer; gauging my
    love for you in two forms
    Quality and Quantity,
    not how quickly I get to you
    or you -- get to me...and it's
    Your decision to keep up
    the pace in this relay
    towards love

    Validate our future ~


    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2....

    this has blown me away...

    & he will be blown away also! :wink:

    i can relate--
    to your feelings of wanting/needing your future
    together to be validated... *wishing you the best!*

    OneLuv...
    SunShyne~
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GA~

    Why thank you gurlie!

    ......thanks for the comps!.....
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wowww, gurl, this is tyght, too, as only you can tell it. but you already know this.

    ~~letlovepoetryflo~~
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lister~

    Ya' keeps a sista cheesin'! Thanks girl!! :lol:
     
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