Black Poetry : UNTITLED..BUT IF YOU THINK YOU KNOW, SUGGEST ONE

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  1. SAARONCROWELL

    SAARONCROWELL Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There was a time when I wished...
    ..No~
    Make that, I prayed, that I would be...
    ..The one that you would cleave unto~
    But, more times than I chose not 2 see...
    ..You continuously showed me~
    That I was not that guy...
    ..Leaving my heart to question why~
    It allowed me to do all the things I did 4 U...
    ..Knowing in the depths of my soul I was being used by U~
    And now, I no longer seek to rationalize...
    ..The things done in the past~
    Without remorse, I can look you straight in the eyes...
    ..Telling you unequivocably~
    To kiss, my broad, fat, black ***!!!!!!*

    Saaroncrowell
    (C)1979 ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
    *strange that no matter how much time goes by...
    some things are always appropo!!!!!
     
  2. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sounds like someone took off the "blinders" hu?
    lol
    know the feeling...nice piece brotha

    8th!
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad ya' could....

    release tha tension...!! :lol:
    WOWSERS!!!
     
  4. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice piece, SC

    how about "Realization's Redemption"

    this scribe was straight to the point, that's what i'm talkin' bout.

    one love,blak
     
  5. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    S, sounds like to me you have seen the lyte. ummmm I like verbs suggestion, you have realized and now you have been reedeemed because you told them to get off.
     
  6. Ms. Acqua Di

    Ms. Acqua Di Member MEMBER

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    :toast: Seems like a brotha waz peepn a sister's thoughts. Good peace!!!
     
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