Black Haiku : Untitled(any suggestions?)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by cocobutterskyn, Jul 25, 2002.

  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Unkind behavior
    interferes with our blessings
    is it worth the loss?


    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    you Are A Prophetic Haikuist

    CoCo,

    I want you to know that this is the second time that you have posted a haiku that dealt directly with me. It is so strange, yet so spiritual. I would appreciate if you would come and get your spying equipment out of my house. :D Seriously, in my prayer this morning, I had to repent of this very thang because I did not want my blessings held up. I'm alright now, but I still need you to stay out of my business...alright?

    Now for a title. If this was my haiku, I would title it by the very first sentence...Unkind behaviour. What do you think?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    in agreement yet (Behaviour unkind) would be mines
     
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