Black Poetry : UNTITLED(Anger displaced)

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  1. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What accounts for an obvious
    disassociation amongst brothaz
    one that raises a right hand high
    armed with a razor and rage
    HEAT/HATRED/and HUMILITY
    to strike my left cheek as
    life escapes and streams
    towards the earth
    stains the concrete jungles turf
    muffled cries of a battered soul
    TEARLESS
    FEARLESS
    with my own hand
    i dab and smear this
    THIS precious fluid
    flowing like the nile
    flowing like niagra falls
    flowing like the wind is blowing
    like the breeze
    thru eucalyptus trees
    to rest easy
    but still RESTLESS
    RELENTLESS
    comforted with contradictions
    never foolish
    but still lost amidst a sea of
    CHAOS/SIN/and CONFUSION
    mentally broken and somehow
    Emotionally SOUND
    SOLID and SANE
    the eyes are the windows to the soul
    and pain has permanent residency!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    see dis what i be talkin' bout

    right here ya painted a reality check .......hell yeah!
     
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    Dyme......

    An excellent poem....keep em comin!


    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    Hey Dyme,

    Nice to see you. This is a very good flo. I totally enjoyed the read. Thanks.

    Madd Holiday Greetings :heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
  5. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ ~ Reality checked me!!! hey playa we need to flow like we used to...look for a FREESTYLE joynt soon, aiight?

    Epiphany~ THANX a million...as long as i have a pen and paper, or envelope or business card or receipt, etc. i'll keep on scribin...lol

    Cocobutterskyn~ Thanx for readin' ya boi...missed you...COCO-FELT-DA FLOW :) and madd holiday greetings back atcha.

    Love&Respect
    Dp2g

    p.s. you guys should see me around more often now because i'm off the runways till my stitches come outta my face...look fo' me!
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    2G

    nice powerful stuff
    keep that head up
    man

    one love as always

    >DSSNY<
     
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    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PLAAAAYA...

    what da deal??? glad u checked me out yo...fa real! i was out yo way last month wit my peeps in washington hts. and da month befoe workin...we should chill next time or summ...its on u. and yo i keepz da head raised...nah mean? look fo' a PAYBACK joynt postin any day now.

    LOVE&RESPECT
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