Black Poetry : untitled and unfinished

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  1. who~is~she

    who~is~she Active Member MEMBER

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    drowning in a pool of lonliness
    gaging on the wretched stinch that
    starts in the pit of my stomach and works
    its way out through my nose
    untill i regurgitate the sorrows of my soul
    choking on the remains of my pain
    then and only then does a reincarnation on my dispair
    come to save me
    not from myself or from drowning but ,
    the the hope of happiness
    suffocating any thought of joy
    breaking my spirit
    I sift through what is left of my self worth
    there is not enough to pull me out.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!!

    :spin:
    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the new home u found within
    welcome from above as i bless u some love
    happy you here to share and flow sho some love
    and a lot mo! welcome this was tyte scribing
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    do hope you consider or decide on membership here at destee's
    and enjoy the full features & benefits as a PREMIUM MEMBER as
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    Hello and welcome to destee.com
    very tight intense flow enjoyed it
    looking to read more from you
    come join us in chat as well
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    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Well that about sums up my mood. Have you been reading my mind? LOL...... good scribe...
     
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    nice first drop... dont be shy... and drop some mo
     
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    Very powerful piece, I can feel the ache. Yet with a poetic style like this, we know there's so much more to come, right? Welcome to destee, love to hear more!
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    intense...abyss if emotion
    thanks for sharing...
    share some more...
    i like the title...that's what pulled me in..
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    intense...abyss if emotion
    thanks for sharing...
    share some more...
     
  9. who~is~she

    who~is~she Active Member MEMBER

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    thanks

    thank u all for the love
     
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