Black Poetry : Untitled(All I WANT)

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  1. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes…
    I just wanna
    Sit and reflect
    On the days
    And …
    Just daze
    Thinking about when
    I was this age
    Or that age
    Pinpoint the exact
    Date
    Time
    And place
    Of my youthful
    Lustful
    RAAAAGE
    And
    Be FREE
    But a SLAVE
    But
    To MYSELF
    Because
    WHO ELSE?
    Can command a stronger presence
    Love?
    Well yeah I love it
    But it’s eluded me lately
    Resulted in dates
    That were shady
    Arguing over the phone
    Like I’m HER lady
    And have her baby
    And the **** state pays me
    To feed my seed
    Determine and meet
    My needs
    Emotional greed
    Keeps you healthy
    Where as I…
    Just wanna learn to love again…
    And be free to be
    LOVED!!!
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well love on then! i LOVE this flow.... -7:spinstar:
     
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    Dyme!!!

    This hea is some top notch scribin poet!!! loved the flow of this peice!!!

    Reas
     
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    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WILDFLOWER~ It's always you who never seems to miss a love flow... gotta love you :) thanks ma!

    REASON~ This came from an instant message where i was asked why i choose to stay single, yet have a desire to love.

    thanks for checkin it out!

    LOVE&RESPECT
    DP2G
     
  5. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dyme

    what Reason said and shoot you answered that instant message to me. Everybody wants and needs to be loved and have a desire to express love.




    One
     
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    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i have so much that i could say about this....but i'll just leave it at...this is an excellent flow!
     
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