Black Poetry : Untitled........(A love poem)

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  1. Pharaoh Jahil

    Pharaoh Jahil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Looking into her innocent Eygptian eyes,
    She stands along the River Nile, holding me
    as our souls connect...I feel myself in the
    realm of paradise while the sun kisses us
    both from the heavens...
    The Love between me and her stands
    strong like the Pyramids..A divine pattern
    followed like the stars in the sky,
    Feeling the spirit of ever lasting peace,
    standing in the presence of the daughter
    of Isis...Her love is royalty, treasured
    unconditionally... Visions of her takes
    me into a world of extacy..
    The delicacy of her feminine touch
    is soothing against my masculinity..
    We are unified by the Great Spirit of the
    Universe...she is my other half, my balance,
    the Empress to my throne, the foundation to my nation..
    Together we are the definition of "Love"...
     
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    Now this flowed like a vision of Nubian royalty. A king sincerely cherishing his queen. Wonderful flow brotha.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    simply beautiful like an nubian glaze
     
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    pharoh jalil

    wow i was so impressed with this that i felt i was somewhere else with this.
     
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    Hi Pharaoh Jahil
    This poem just took me there
    i enjoy the gentle ease in your poetry
    I became enchanted
    just from the feel of love in paradise
    so sweet :)
    The joy and the pleasure to share a love
    as you have script, is indeed a Sun Kiss.
    Peace
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

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    Alright now...glad to be reading you again...your one of my favs...
    i am loving this vibe aint nothing like a good dose of love to help you along....

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Oh, u took me somwhere...
    ....somewhere I would like to be.
    Oh this is....
    .......so prettay.
     
  8. Pharaoh Jahil

    Pharaoh Jahil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm glad you enjoyed this black people. This poem was actually dedicated to a special lady who I am building a relationship with right now...Thanx for the love people. It is truly apprieciated.
     
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    Its nice to have a muse to inspire such creativity. Beautifully said/written.
     
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