Black Poetry : untitled 4

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Deep within the thoughts
    a free spirit
    Roams
    laid in its way
    a path of darknest.
    Feelin demons movin
    But steps over into light
    And searches the unknown
    As shadows follow It fears defeat
    as it tries to cross
    The pain is gone but lingers
    It refuse to see the steps
    Taken to deliver this rare gift
    Within itself..but holds on
     
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    deep within the thoughts a spirit
    roams..as the mind wonders...
    .the gift is within..a spirit that roams

    thanks for the read Ola
    :angel1:
     
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    when you are clinging to the
    underbelly of pain
    the leap to the clear field
    looks so dangerous
    it is easier to cling to that
    which you unfortunately
    know so well
    jump sister jump
    take it
    the leap
    into the unknown
    through the darkness
    into the light

    :kiss:
     
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    indeed and the free spirit
    which roam will guide u
    to peace
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    to unfold the darknest ya
    must face the light...
    wish it was wish it wasnt
    but the line that sets
    the peace is there its
    the love growin within itself
    grace of the flame intertwine
    of the emotions
    that sets the thoughts of
    a free spirit that
    Roam

    thanks for the read gempis and $$Rich$$

    love yall's support
     
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    this is very emotive...yes, I know the feeling
    of being free yet...past shadows of whatever
    that pain may be representative of...attempts
    to linger....
    the wonderful thing is that...darkness cannot
    exist in light...
    Stay in the light sister...Peace and Blessings!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sister angelicsage...thanks for gracin my page with your words...means alot...much love :angel1:
     
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