Black Poetry : *untitled #38*

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  1. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    there's a sort of
    melancholy that

    hangs

    in the corners of the day
    when an intense
    wave of heat is

    replaced

    by cool breezes and
    bright blue cloud swept skies
    warm sunshine
    and it finds you
    sitting on the edge
    it pulls at your heartstrings
    you suddenly find yourself
    with misty eyes
    needing to cry
    for no reason.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    i don't know

    but to me this sounds like loving life
    or been through so much now you took a moment to realize how far you've come.

    but i don't know

    but i DO know i felt this piece
     
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    this piece taste like cotton candy on a soft day....

    nice...W7

    blak
    verb
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    TOOOO SWEET

    YA WORKED DES OUT PERFECTLY
    LIKE A BITE OF CHOCOLATE:D
     
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    Been there

    It bees like dat sumtymes--for no reason--just because--Amun-Ra
     
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    thank you so
    for the responses
    this morning i realized
    the reason for the tears
    ... they weren't for
    nothing.
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WILDFLOWER

    LOVING THIS FLOW ...COMPLETELY.

    GYPSYMAN
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm so glad
    you enjoyed this
    gypsyman!
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    Always beautiful
     
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    wildflower, gurl, this is a very well written piece. hmmm, sweet melancholy painted on canvas bringin' forth life's reality...but, i could be wrong. whateva, it's too tyght! you know that i think yo work is alwayz tyght! i'm still watchin', dear friend.


    ~~~letitflo~~~
     
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