Black Poetry : Untitled 365

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Black bones from talcum dusted
    stretched stark to cold grey skies
    watched from never seeing eyez
    a penknife heart so declares a
    last season love

    vertical scars lash unforgotten
    a bruin boundary marked
    fidelity & territory
    love stallz in a maze
    carved in black sleep
    bruin and flatland lovers
    fingers of hand understand
    the life of green and quaking
    gold snapped & scattered
    in a crystal fold

    beneath a cold comforter
    lies an icy path of locks
    to unlock an interloper
    where love lure between
    the equinox
    a summer gleam captured
    fopr the autumn alchemy
    in the face of blue heavens
    white clouds soft float
    night & day rivers flow
    in a drifty blue sweet & freely
    cross da land which standz alone
    aspen the winter snow soon theirs none
     
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    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I almost got lost in this one $RICH$. Vivid imagery captured my mind. Where is this place? Aspen? Or in your mind?
     
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    what can I say? the awesome abstract flow!
    loved this!
    Peace!
     
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    Dreamweaver....it was a mental mind vision clap wit thoughts
    so i had to hurry and poetically sprayed to canvas............
    before it be of none .

    Thankz bruh! da mind was into something that pen dis flow
    u know me i come wit many faces
     
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    Great Scribe!

    $$RICH$$
    This was full of vivid images and I was starring on each line with you. Not sure where you were, but I was with you, the view was lovely from where I was sitting (smile)

    AqueenPassing
     
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    thanx sis ............i was in the mental walls
     
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    o yesssssssssssss cindy
    ya words took me in
    let enjoy da moment
    as the last flake fall
    and sunshine of blossom
    become of bloom
    as our love rise
    yessssssssssssssssss!!!!
     
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    The many shapes of which love takes. You say it so...without saying it at all. I've studied abstract art produced by a brush but you seem to have captured it with a "Quill". I loved it, thanks for the voyage.
     
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    most welcome angelicsage.......continue to ride
    i pose love in many styles
     
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    Sir $$RICH$$ you know you gone have to let me get in the 747 one of these days...... I like this on you


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