Black Poetry : untitled 3

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    if i gave you my love
    could you love me forever?
    take away the pain and wipe
    away the tears
    show me what true love could be like
    or is it all about talk....i
    walk this road so many times
    ups and downs lost
    and alone how i would be
    if i just had that special one ....
    tired of the games and the wanna bes
    for my love is true like no other......
    but if i gave u my love would you
    take it for grated it, or cherish it
    as you should?
    loving you is natural for for me.....
    drawn to you like no other
    sharing my soul with you....
    anything your after
    i would try to help you reach it....
    you got me in love with you.....
    oops ur not to know that yet.....
    now dont get me wrong
    i dont care what sort of car you drive
    or how much money you have....
    i got my own...
    i am a fighter if i see where i can....
    i strive to get it....and if i see it can happen
    i fight that much harder...
    as i make my dreams come true
    i make your dreams mine as well....
    sometimes i wonder y
    i have these beliefs but
    understanding me
    and learning where i am from i get it as i go.......

    JUST SOMETHING EXTRA ON MY MIND NOT A POEM SORRY....
    i believe it is something about
    that link that two have together
    nothing of a fairytale but falls short of one....
    meaning....
    out of a book but better....
    where ur friends wish
    people on the street wish
    they could have a connection
    as that man and woman they see..
    that your mate should be your best friend
    one you can trust one who
    takes your side no matter what.....
    one u can turn to when u have
    no other to turn to...
    have them talks that excites both meaning...
    a conversation that can move the mind further then the heart....
    finish my sentence and i his....
    but still remains in my life and mind
    the best conversation i ever had lead to the extreme bliss of emotional
    vivid
    old folks play....

    a blkangel thang.....
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Responding to the "not poem" part......

    Every word you said is my ultimate desire. But to get that you have to believe it is possible. And unfortunately, many have been soured and hurt by past loves and experiences and have no hope left.

    Keep reminding us of the goal, msblkangel......

    ps - tight flow
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    understand heal and moved on....but to even understand all of it you most believe in yourself and love yourself before anything can come true.....to make possilbe....
    the goal is to know every thing takes time to heal...
    being bitter gets you know where and to close your heart
    you will never get to feel...
    we grow and become strong everyone have a reason for going though the things they do....
    i can go on about my views but i will stop here....
    thank you for reading and replin...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow this peice speaks so much truth i feel ya
    and one must continue on !
     
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    Sista, Your wordz are absolute and defining.
    Feeling your spirit through this one.
    One love........
    )I was particularly moved by the "not a poem piece"
     
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    wow...nicely written piece...
     
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    what do you mean that wasn't a poem! it sure was beautifully written like one! and about your first piece, untitled 3, i'm going through the exact same thing right now, at this very moment. you must be psychic. LOL. this was tight though, and so honest. thank you for sharing that and expressing MY thoughts. LOL. much love.
     
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    $$RICH$$....thank you means alot.

    afrostotle...i am glad you took the time to read and reply thank you.

    LovelyGoldenOne..thank you.

    true love..wow..ok thank you..not psychic.....just things we all go though...it means alot you read and reply
    thank you again...
     
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    but once you get over the hurt and
    pain you can look agian as being
    reborn this is to me
    where you start believin in you
    lov thy self and move on...
    there is someone for ever one...
    something of a soul mate
    that can move you beyond your
    dreams makes you feel
    your on cloud nine all the time....
    its a connection of the mind, spirit
    and soul that no one can come
    between, knows you as you know
    your self, listens and understands
    with out convictions, the commuication
    and the trust level is never a question,
    someone that makes you wonder,
    what if ?
    makes you smile when you cant
    a person that is meant
    for you and only you.---destiny is strong,
    whatever you do you cant avoid it,
    it have a way of coming back around,
    if you leave it...one way or the other
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sorry guys just feeling this for some reason today...
     
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