Black Poetry : untitled #24

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thepoetsean, Mar 27, 2001.

  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mmone
    12:48pm


    (diddy boppin' to the beat of a different drum)

    i got bongos in my mind--
    not my head--
    in my soul

    i dance to them--
    while my day goes with gentle winds--

    weather changes--
    and so does the tune--

    superfluous bull--
    can't supress the drum from drowning out--
    any negativity--

    ****...y'all feel that?
    its me
    i did that--
    I composed that tune--

    from deep within my--
    ***Afri-Can-ity
    and ancestry--

    those bongos in my head are--
    ultimately....
    me


    (steppin' off diddy boppin')
     
  2. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cool joint.... felt the vibe.

    8th!
     
  3. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks!!!

    I am really glad that y'all took time out to feel this one.

    sean.greg.perk.
     
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    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa...

    now u know im diggin this sean!!!
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sean I gotta give you love dog... im always checkin fa ya work!

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
  6. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ****...

    You are too much, I'm serious. Your flow is, just, astounding. There's so much life in your work; it, figuratively, jumps out at the reader. Hot piece, poet...:hot:
     
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    i felt it
    still feeling it

    thank you for this
    very nice

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    destee maple reas and SG

    thank you
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SEANY!....

    bongos huh?...

    continue to follow the beat of your own drum!

    & for those who can't understand or comprehend...

    maybe they will in tyme... til then flow on like

    ya know!! :wink:

    AlwaysLove...
    SunShyne~
     
  10. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sean, i hear it...wowww, quite nyce, dear poet.

    ~~inkdrops~~
     
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