Black Poetry : UNTITLED #23

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The heavens opened up
    Dayum you spoiled me
    For you….
    My tears fell with the rain
    Last night….feeling like I
    I was in hell
    My being yelling
    Why me….

    You spoiled me so…now
    It is hard to move on
    From you…
    My friend
    My lover
    My baby sweet baby

    My tears ran with the rain
    Because of you
    Trying to move
    But my heart wont let me
    Now you say you miss me
    Us….

    But we still

    ... going through the same ish….

    My heart cried
    I cried
    For you
    Missing you so
    Wedding rings
    Baby names
    What the hell….see
    I tried to be strong
    But you got me spoiled
    Seems like it is no way out
    Still feeling you
    Knowing you still love me

    but.....
    .....going through the same ish

    My heart is covered in your love

    The heavens opened up
    My tears ran with the rain
    The storm took me in
    But …in the midst of it all
    I remembered who I was
    It’s a new day
    Without you

    Once again....

    I cried with the rain

    My love is still as strong
    As if you were with me…


    Chapter 3
    One Woman’s Heart
    By An Angel
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    those are great lines "my tears ran with the rain"..."my tears fell with the rain""the storm took me in.."
    blessed we are to know that the storm will eventually pass over...
    a piece of haiku in there for sure as well as the insightful poetry
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep emotions flowing da heart flooded wit love and feelings yet
    same ish ...............well felt scribe
     
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    We live, we learn, we grow...yet get stronger with time...
    cause love just don't pack-up, and walk out on love
     
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    heavy...with emotion
    your words pour like the
    rain you speak of
    the love of a woman can
    move mountains...
    when it's this real
    ...you conveyed that so well

    love the work...
    Sage
     
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