Black Poetry : Untitled #1

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  1. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh my goodness, I think I live at the zoo
    I'd run away to the circus but they live here too
    I can't even plead a case of temporary insanity
    For this is becoming an everyday profanity
    Folks about to make a sister go totally mental
    And do something seriously detrimental

    Cause when a woman is truly done
    Brother you better just pack up and run
    For just as good as she was too you boo
    She can turn around as be just that bad too

    Love's fraternal twin, lust will get you every time
    For lust to long on the mind will led to the crime
    It'll have you forgetting the royalty on the home front
    Giving up the queen for some random side c**t
    The winds of temptation have cause many to stray
    And I ain't saying they lack the appeal to cause you to sway
    But brother I beseech you to count up the cost before it to late
    You and I both know there's a thin line between love and hate

    Cause when a woman is truly done
    Brother you better just pack up and run
    For just as good as she was too you boo
    She can turn around as be just that bad too
     
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    LOL! You said it!

    "Ya'll gone make me lose my mind, up in heah! Ya'll gone make me act a FOOL, up in heah, up in heah!" lol


    And, Oh, yes!...."When A Woman's Fed Up!"


    I do feel ya.


    I told one of my exes that he could even tell his friends that he broke up with me...Just leave me alone from that day on!



    VENT!
     
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    Sounds like...

    a brother is trying to make you cross that thin line. g'on girl put 'em on notice!



    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    look out now .......seem like one is everywhere you turn I feel ya here
     
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