Black Poetry : untitle life

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    black tears…
    that’s what I cry…
    listen to the pen…
    tell me why….
    That is all I need to know…
    Black on black love
    That’s all we should have
    Be true to thy self….
    We in this together yall…
    What happen to the hugs…
    Instead of drugs….
    Black on black love….
    Committed crimes among
    Our on people…..
    Why is all I need to know…
    fears changes…
    the struggle just got
    harder…
    we are in faith hands..
    running out of time….
    try to make the best
    But it don’t come
    So easy….
    This land was made for us…
    Cant live in peace for the traps
    Looking out side the window…
    All I see…
    Is crime
    Pain… hurt
    And sorrow….
    Every 20 mins a child
    dies a violent death
    Drama
    Of the black on black love
    What a mentality….
    What happen to the love ….
    Be true to thyself..
    Its time to heal…
    Mend that hole
    We made…
    Black on black love
    We need more of…
    It’s the beginning….
    Time to start that task
    In makin our world
    The hood….
    a little better…
    the best
    creation every made..
    destoyin and hurtin thy self…
    black on black love
    where have it gone
    tell me please….
    It’s a chain react…
    reverse it…
    To chain react the right way…

    a blkangel thang
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice...
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you LovelyGoldenOne
    for readin
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your call for peace needs to be heard, I'm feelin' it.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was off da hook i felt the black pain in ya pen
    as it drop black tears to the page .....
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the read...Rich
     
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