Black Poetry : Untitle #7

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  1. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You've done what you needed to
    Definitly made your point
    Im not the man you thought I was
    So your out of this joint

    You painted the perfect picture
    Of how you thought things or I should be
    Wanted life the storybook way, but it didnt come with me
    You wanted marriage, right after love,
    Kinda like in the movies
    Wasnt willing take a little time
    So now your through with me

    Casting me aside soley off my believe
    You like to emphasize love,
    But what happen when it came to me

    You loved me enough to marry me
    But to little to stick around
    Felt marriage should be automatic
    If loves is what we've found

    And I agreed but not in its entirity
    See I believed foundation first
    Would set us were we needed to be

    You no like, 2 months without you putting me out
    And all you could say is
    It wouldnt happen if I was your spouse

    It WOULD NOT HAPPEN IF WE WERE MARRIED
    Thats your favorite line to yell
    Im like right, right,
    But itll never happen as long as Im around the cornor
    and over the hill!

    You invision this as the way it has to be
    Get married or Get out
    Hll of an option for me!

    And to you not even a tad bit irrational
    Let you tell your 26 now
    this is how it has to be!

    To old to have boyfriends
    But only if its me
    If Im not marring you
    Then single you'd rather be!

    Pressure Pressure Pressure
    My cup runnith over
    I said patience baby, Her repy
    Its over.

    Patience does nothing for me
    I want a family, dog, house
    The good life you see!

    Patience does nothing for you
    And your willing to give up me
    And I really thought you love me
    But marriage was really the need

    Cause in my eyes its very cut and dry
    Im a rider baby
    And I was with you ride or dye
    Marriage or not I was there to the end
    Trying to create our future
    And this is where the end begin

    Though I was being honest, so you wouldnt feel pushed off
    Honetsy the best policies huh,
    Even when loves the cost!
    Unfin.
    Lj
     
  2. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ouch, I feel the emotion in this one. But hey, God's always got a plan:).
     
  3. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thnks thnks,
    I appreciate the read
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

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    this was some deep thoughts scribe....flow on.....this was posed well
    likes the drop my brother....Angel
     
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    Emotively brought....I'm thinking, is it really over? Could you both meet each other some where in the middle? Call me a romantic, but I'm thinking if the two of you are still in love, and you can't just fall out of love instantly, then, perhaps there's still a chance....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well done poet i like dis here flow
     
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