Black Poetry : Until Then and Now

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by whisper, Oct 15, 2003.

  1. whisper

    whisper Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    when i can close my eyes and see the sun still
    i know there is the strength and will
    of yesterday pains and scars
    strong enough to say never more
    UNTIL THEN and.....NOW
    the mind was closed and lips were sealed
    inner person made me appeal
    to the masses some of same pain
    only not having my name

    but they spoke of knowledge and truth
    of love and concern
    to keep me here and stern
    THEN and NOW
    i have woke and awaken
    thank you my sisters FOR I CANNOT BE SHAKEN ..forevermore


    to Regina, Sayword,Angelicsage,Triniti424,More,Nia Maishani
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is profound insight, whisper. I congratulate you for both the depth of your thinking and the talent in your pen.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice
     
  4. whisper

    whisper Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you, Gemmpis, sometimes pens are stronger than tears.
    they both tend to leak but one you can wipe away and the other you erase
    thanks again
     
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    awwwwwwwwww....whisper...:blush: see why you wanna make a sista get all weepy :cry: lol

    we didnt do nan but love ya ...cause you are worth it and that I know :grouphug:
     
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    Sister...you got me all misty :cry: ...and that's hard to do
    but I read your reply on me and my sisters man tease piece
    and then I went searching for your then and now and
    I must say...it was worth the search to find you...

    You've touched my heart on this morning...I should be thanking
    you Whisper...so happy that your finding that inner strength, that was always there...
    Much love to you girl! and we are always here for you! :grouphug:
    :heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:
     
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    whisper Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you sisters just dont know how happy i am to be surrouned by beautiful minds
    thanks
    agape
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a strong Affirmation!

    What a wonderful affirmation. I suggest you to add this to your spoken word repertoire`, (YOU SAY WHICH , WHAT?) YEAH!
    This was awesome! Thanks for sharing !
    BLESSINSG ON YOUR HOUSE!
     
  9. Nia Maishani

    Nia Maishani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Peaceful greetings, Whisper. No thanks necessary, Sweetie. That is what kinfolk are for. You certainly are talented in the Poetry arena. I look forward to reading more of your scribin'.

    :heart:agape:heart:upendo:heart:
    JahBless,

    Nia
     
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