Black Poetry : Until the Next Time...

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  1. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Until the Next Time...

    My intention is to keep
    Me on your brain daily and nightly
    I need you to know and understand that this woman
    Is not just some showy show that’s only interested in
    Some okey-doke, not tryn to perpetrate a fraud
    Or lead you into some smoke and smog
    My mission is to infiltrate your mind, body and heart

    Until the Next Time…
    I want to get to know you mentally and emotionally
    So when I know you physically, you will know
    With me is where your suppose to be
    Because no other woman will have come as close
    As me, to satisfying your every need
    Your search will be over because I am she

    I will keep erotic thoughts and visions
    Of you and I in your mind
    Daily tease and promise you
    The insides of my chocolate thighs
    Share this blueprint I have created for you and I
    Of passionate days and passionate nites

    Until the Next Time…
    You will be anticipating
    The look in my eyes
    The taste of my kiss
    The feel of my breathe blowing in your ear
    The flick of my tongue driving you insane
    No matter where I put it you will say my name
    Having you fantasizing about my naked frame
    The sway of my curvy hips will be the blame
    For the naughty pleasures I aim to gain

    Until the Next Time…
    You will replay the words of this scribe
    Over and over in your mind
    That you will be able to recite it to me
    In your sleep

    Until the Next Time…
    Just know my intentions will never be discreet
    I’m putting all my cards on the table
    Because when I play, I play for keeps

    So Until the Next Time we meet….
     
  2. sweet apple*pie

    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very yummy

    Oh man, how lovely was this! Very nice, soothing sentiment, and sensuality.

    I really enjoyed the calmness, and love of this flo.
     
  3. Clyde C Coger Jr

    Clyde C Coger Jr going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    In the Spirit of Sankofa!

    Well...here comes 4EVERLUV and all the trimmings. Just when you think not, here comes 4EVERLUV of all the womens. Cooking up all the semens, I mean just down right swimming.:) (hope my comments are acceptable and in good taste, if not it can be deleted)

     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    woooooweeeee!!!
    got my mind body and soul attention
    this was delightful and tasty u know i wanna go there .
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    IT'S NICE...

    ...to see a woman who's not afraid to go after what she wants...and lay all her cards on the table...confident she's able to PLEASE her man. BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN.
     
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    Playing for Keeps Wow!

    That's my favorite in all the great lines in this. "The Until Next Time" really has a neat effect. It intensifies the anticipation and redefines the classic To Be Continued. And perhaps that's the point because if love is true it is to be continued... So Until the Next Episode keep those sensual skillz locked and don't touch that dial! Cause we'll be right back after these messages of 4Everluv!
     
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    Something to keep him ready and waiting, desiring more because it's you that he just can't get out of his mind. Well, if he didn't know, now he does. Bull's eye poetess.
     
  8. 4EVERLUV

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    sweet apple*pie:
    Thank you 4 your kind sweet words.:)


    Clyde Coger:
    What can I say....other than....
    Thank you dear for taking the time
    to read me. You are 2 much.


    $$RICH$$:
    Babe lets GO....you know 4EVER-LUVS
    to flo with U. As always your a sweetheart:heart:


    baller:
    I am just 2 tickled 2 see you commenting on
    my poem. There are some poets here that I am
    really big fans of and your 1 of them.
    So thank u so very much. As for my confidence
    I am a firm believer in "A Closed Mouth
    Does not get Fed" so I tend to not have a problem
    with asking for what I want or at least letting it be known.


    Tha-Emissary:
    First, where have you been? Its so nice
    to see you around, You always say the most
    wonderful things. I have a feeling there
    will be some Next Episodes 2, so you make
    sure you do not stay gone 2 long so you can
    check them out. O.K. don't wanna have 2 come
    l@@kn 4 u. Your kind words are greatly appreciated




    Much Luv 2 you all
     
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    Yo sister 4everLuv :)
    This piece right here is so YOU
    Its affirmative without being aggressive
    Its to the point but still soft
    I mean like Brotha Baller said
    Its a woman who knows who she is and what she wants and values her time :read:
    I love it sister!
    I think a strong minded self assurant sister is one who can readily love herself-her man- her people!
    Goooooood stuff my sister :read:
    Dont be shy to the pen :)
    MUCH props my sister poetess :)
     
  10. Clyde C Coger Jr

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    In the Spirit of Sankofa!




    4EVERLUV,

    It is a plum pleasing pleasure to read you my Friend!


     
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