Black Poetry : Until the end of February

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  1. Laydee Chups

    Laydee Chups Active Member MEMBER

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    Hay wats up. This is just a lil suttn I wrote.. hope y'all enjoy.



    Until the end of February

    They told her she would have to wait
    Nothing more could be done
    She knew it was over there and then
    Her hope died for her at that point

    She knew things would never be the same
    There was no point fooling herself
    The pain was getting worse
    Her heart was getting weak
    But still, she waited patiently

    The weeks passed but she only grew weaker
    Winter came and she was bed-ridden
    By the spring she was hanging on by a thread
    And she was still waiting, until the end of February

    She gave up the struggle, gave up the fight
    Her family mourned for her but now she was free
    The pain was gone
    The waiting was over

     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome

    welcome to destee's poetic playground
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    love the flow she waited for her day
    this was beautifully posed like a red rose
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  3. kaly

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    I really enjoyed your poem
     
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    nice scribe, Makes me think of my father
     
  5. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    loved this

    very emotional

    keep it up
     
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