Black Poetry : ...Unsuspectful Sexy...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LovelyGoldenOne, Jul 15, 2003.

  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She breathes
    And moves
    Quickly
    In groove
    Walks down
    The street
    To the grounds
    Heartbeat
    She takes
    Control
    And rakes
    Turmoil
    She looks
    So fine
    And hooks
    The dymes
    She walks
    With ease
    And talks
    To please
    And makes
    Contact
    With eyes
    Relaxed
    The men
    They stare
    For then
    They care
    They think
    She’s fine
    So they wink
    With time
    Outside
    She’s beautiful
    Inside
    She’s over full
    With the lies
    And deceit
    And the highs
    In retreat
    They think
    She’s perfect
    They think
    With her effect
    If only
    They knew
    The pain
    She goes through
    At night
    When alone
    As she cries
    To be home
    But all
    They see
    Is all
    The flashy
    As her hair
    Is cornrowed
    Giving her flair
    With sorrow
    And her natural
    Way of beauty
    With little tactual
    Makeup beauty
    Her body
    Is to please
    As its guarded
    With ease
    With the perfect
    Lovely shape
    And the perfect
    Hour glass bait
    The hips that
    can make you sin
    The lips that
    Sensuously blend
    The a*s that is
    That fire
    The one that is
    Sexually desired
    While she walks
    Down the street
    And her body’s
    In defeat
    They think
    She’s perfect
    They think
    Under her effect
    They judge
    Too highly
    Their true love
    Is tiny
    She knows
    How they think
    But she grows
    Spiritually
    For the love
    From another
    And above
    Can prove to others
    That she is
    A women
    But she lives
    With burdens
    And like them
    She has a need
    To fall to Him (God)
    On her knees…
     
  2. PurpleMoons

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    wow! I loved this! You captured the heart well! I Loved it! tyte piece!
     
  3. Rico

    Rico Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lovely, This was a beautiful piece. Very nice.
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwwwwwwwwww thanks purplemoons glad u enjoyed it!:)
     
  5. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks rico...i just wrote about myself...and how i see people view me..
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o'my i love this piece it captured the true beauty of love
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very beautiful, lovelygoldenone, it has natural flow to it,
    i like
     
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    I love the way that you wrtoe this, ;) :) tyte flow lovely :)
     
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    Something a little different from you Lovely...but im lovin it all the same.:D
     
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    Lovely....you are soooooooooooo gifted. Nice piece!
     
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