Black Poetry : Unspoken...

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Have you ever been in love
    Heartbroken...

    Cried when Ali lost
    Joe smokin' ~

    Curse your nasty boss
    While coping...

    Cherishing a loss
    Eyes open...

    Have you ever felt unloved
    Hope daunting...

    Back against the wall
    Then punting...

    Push come to shove
    Doors open...

    Wise after all
    Unspoken...



    Darryl Abdu Omari :zipit:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2007
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What appears to be hopeless could one day change into hope eternal, the tables can certainly change. I appreciate this uplifting vibe, 1poet.
     
  3. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah, I fell in love, went out on a rope,
    end up with my poor heart broke.

    I cried when ali lost a bout,
    that lucky punch sure..took him out.

    That nasty Boss, I cussed him out,
    he let me go...without a doubt.

    I cherished the day of the love I loss,
    cause I was the only one paying the cost.

    I felt unloved for many years
    I carry the scare of the dried up tears

    These bricks are standing mighty tall,
    you got my back against the wall.
    But I'm bouncing off like the final call,
    It won't be me who take that fall.

    When push come to shove, it's not a good thing,
    pain and heartache is all it bring.
    unless you push me in the right direction,
    then you will earn my total affection.​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    only in time so forth will change bruh awesome piece
     
  5. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    stand your ground

    poet

    it was true to you

    so you went and got it

    that's real

    peace
     
  6. Auroraflower

    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes ...







    i know the feeling ...







    let me speak.....






    i find youre poetic you beautifull...









    Loveauroraflower:heart:

















    Loveauroraflower:heart:
     
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