Black Poetry : Unspoken

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  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As thoughts run through my mind
    The chaos of ordinary life

    I see that I am in reality
    Still distant to the concrete realness
    Of my existance
    Beyond the subtle hellos and goodbyes

    I am fading into a world
    Of possibilities
    And yet it's persistence

    Is gently persuading me to come visit
    Thoughts pervading
    Gently non-resistant

    Thinking of what can or couldn't be
    Inspiration
    Is my reality
    Reception

    Can't get through to the ordinary
    few.

    So I need vivid representation
    To keep hope alive
    I am captive to this fixation

    And intoxication


    Unpoken
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da body is captive yet da mind is free
     
  3. Mark Wilson

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    Speaking to Desert Storm

    Desert Storm are you captivated by a day dream?
    That holds out a wonderful fantastic life theme.
    That offers you all that you want and would need
    I've had day wonderful day dreams like that indeed!

    You expressed it quite well
    My God bless you to excell!
     
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    There are some who say that if you can see it, visualize it, that will take you even closer to changing hopes into reality. I enjoyed this, and can relate.
     
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