Black Poetry : UNSPOKEN WORDS

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  1. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The things i felt so deeply
    the feelings that i denied so well, and said that they
    weren't real

    they were unspoken words
    and dey were not revealed in time

    so many times u called me confused
    but i jus didnt want to be in love to lose
    or get my soul abused
    so which option would u have wanted me to chose?

    u said yo love was real
    but i jus didnt want to believe that my
    hate would eva be relived
    so baby i jus didnt c yo true deal

    times and times i told u that my mind was messed up
    but words like dat got chu fed up
    u said my mind was fine but my soul was jus indenial

    but y did u have to remined me about the feelin of love
    i was jus fine be4 u came
    but i kno datz a lie, i kno u wudda said yes
    a luv like urs was so multiply that i wud neva eva want to divide
    but some how i did
    how could i have been so perfect without ur love
    i wanted to tell u that it was u dat completes me
    but that was one of my unspoken words

    yo words were alwayz spoken, but mines werent,
    i knew that drew u crazey
    but my mouth was jus to lazy to reply
    but dats how u passed by me
    i asked u to stay
    but dat didnt stop u, u thought i wasnt ready 4 a luv like urs
    becuz of my unspoken words u left
    i kne u wanted me 2 call u dat day be4, but i didnt and now
    i think, what if i had made dat phone call, wud u have stayed,
    to patienly, to hear those unspoken words
    i kno u kne the wait was worth it but i i guess
    u were goin through too much
    i kne u needed me by yo side but i was alwayz
    on the run, nonstop, cuz the thought of fun only
    came to mind but not my care 4 u, but that wasnt true!
    i jus didnt want to get stuck, so i know dis is the time
    to tell u those words you've been longin to hear,
    my unspoken words were,
    I LOVE U .....

    :hearts2:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was one deep , and heavy as i can hear da whispers in silent glist
    the note of unspoken words i so loveth too .......u laid it out right here sis.
     
  3. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    stank u rich
    im glad u luv it
    much luv my bratha
    (koolaid smilin)..lol


    blackluv and bp
     
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    i can dig it... been there before... hot drop poet
     
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    Love is most definately in the air Ms. GHETTOAMBITION. Flow on like a river girl;)
     
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    very nice poem...i felt it...

    one love
    khasm
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    stank ya ghost writer 4 feelin my flo

    stank ya mz spicy 4 the kind wordz and 4 the luv


    stank ya khasm13 4 showin me sum luv i really appreciate dat my bratha


    blackluv and bp
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i really liked this flo g.a. speaks volume to me. continue on with your flowing sista.:welldone:
     
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    Alright now, G.A. keep bringin' them deep
    poetic thoughts and emotions.
    One love
     
  10. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    stank ya nevar 4 the luv im glad u like it

    stank ya my bratha skrybble7 the luv and i will keep bringin em ...lol



    blackluv and bp
     
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