Black Poetry : Unsatisfied

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  1. ARKontheRiSe

    ARKontheRiSe Member MEMBER

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    hey yall..im a newbie.hope you enjoy!

    The touch of your hand becomes so sensual and comforting
    I need you here with me
    To feel me, be with me
    To want me
    The touch of your lips is a pleasure, something so addictive
    I bathe in your kiss
    I live on your lips
    I Swim in the sweetness of your taste
    The look in your eye becomes so intoxicating
    Your stare answers unanswered questions
    Our eyes meet
    Our desires become visible
    The sound of your voice penetrates my ears
    I hear the beat of your heart
    I listen to the things you don’t say
    Your voice
    Your touch
    Your kiss
    Your eyes
    Becomes inescapable
    Lures me towards you
    Feeling
    unsatisfied
    Without
    You
     
  2. Wisdom7

    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice poem Arkontherise! Welcome to Destee and keep flowing
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice, you captured that feeling of yearning here. Welcome to Destee, hope to read more from you.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the family of peace and respect
    welcome to the house we share , show love as we recieve
    welcome within this was very nicely done enjoyed it look
    to read more of you and feel your warmth of given love
    happy u here.
     
  5. bigdrizzle

    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I enjoyed reading this hot piece! Very good poem.
     
  6. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ark,

    Love is always a great thing to write about. Keep the flow going. Welcome, I'm an old head around here,but, just getting back after a while. But yo, enjoy the stay and look forward to readihng more of your pieces

    blak