Black Poetry : Unprotected Poetry

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Defiantson, Jun 25, 2006.

  1. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Unprotected Poetry

    I have had unprotected poetry
    I mean it was amazing
    the way our two bodies
    just intermingled
    and combusted
    like 2 cosmic souls
    being intertwined as one

    See, see, see we didn't care
    about catching anything
    the only thing that matter to us
    was getting our grove on
    the way her body felt on mine
    was unexplainable
    what I mean is
    it was almost tantric
    the way we made poetry

    I swear she came straight
    out of the Coma Sutra
    the way she moved
    while she was giving me
    her poetry
    it was like a solar eclipse
    and left me speechless
    I was like a sponge
    who just wanted to be
    absorb by her

    And then reality set in
    but it was already to late
    cause while we
    where making poetry
    I came into her
    its not like I meant to
    but it just felt so good
    especially when both of us
    came AT THE EXACT SAME TIME

    So here we are not knowing
    If Henry IV was contracted
    by our ignorance
    let me say that again
    I said NOT KNOWING IF HENRY IV (HIV)
    WAS CONTRACTED BY OUR IGNORANCE
    now the both of us
    have to get poetry tested

    But to receive
    a Poetry Transmitted Disease
    would be a shame
    See while we where making poetry
    we never thought about
    receiving any PTD's
    but see we where both guilty
    and the messed up thing
    was that my condom drawer
    was right next to me

    Now we sit here
    at the clinic
    waiting for the results
    of your PTD's
    hoping and praying
    that neither one of us
    receive Henry IV
    instead we got news
    that our poetry
    created a poetic seed

    we were both in shock
    and 9 months and 1 week later
    36 hours of labor
    another poem was born
    but this type of poem
    was more beautiful
    then a sun twinkling
    on the oceans sea.
    this poem was the essence
    of her and me
    after all she was created
    out of poetry

    Copywrite©Mannie2006
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loved the whole concept of unprotected poetry. There are many things that can come out of it, just like a relationship can create a catastrophe, or blossom a joyous entity. Beautiful...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    This was awesome i love how u drapped this unprotected poetic script
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Defiant, this is a really tyte scribe. Nice work.
    Much Luv
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    papi whats is this this is wow im speechless. i love your metaphors in here. holla at cha gurl
     
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    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DEFINATSON YOU BLEW MY HEAD BACK FOR REAL I LOVED IT

    SWEETTEE29
     
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    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Today is Aids awareness day, so family please take this message seriously. And to you defiant this was a wonderfully creative write. Excellent flo cuz.
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice write!:spin:
     
  9. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am keeping this alive because I feel everyone should recieve the message in this. There is to much bs going on and no one is trying to do anything about it.

    Peace and Poetry
     
  10. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lets give this more time so everyone can enjoy it.
     
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