Black Poetry : -Unnamed-

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Antar, Dec 3, 2004.

  1. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm possessive of your rage,
    the way your melody mocks me
    keeping my secrets hidden on the last page
    to unlock, nothing but time to stop me
    your feverish touch soothing my moods
    of madness, sadness
    propelling my vessel to its' destination
    in the midst of havoc
    evaporating my stress like magic
    yet, still leaving me locked in this labrynith
    a maze, each step illustrating interests
    to occupy my days
    dazzling displays
    majestic arrays
    plentiful as midnight stars to gaze
    a fantasy on parade
    an extravaganza
    panorama of dreams on display
    as far as 2 eyes can gaze
    in tha middle of the wide ocean's waves
    light at the end of my tunnel
    celebration to be made, as i exit my cave
    the elements braved
    excellent
    fine in my mind alike
    to my barren pallette, 2
    taste fresh mint
    a cooling bath of aqua (azul)
    surrounded by flora (rojo y verde), after an eternity of hell-spent.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i love how this leaked out to canvas Antar
    tyte write wow!
     
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    you rocked da images dun....major props on dis piece...word
    one love
    khasm
     
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    This descriptive verse brings so many pleasurable images to mind....it flowed like the ocean poet.
     
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    awesome flowing enjoyed this read
     
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    de colores de magnifico mi hermano

    loved the imagery

    loved the vividness

    feelin da vibe my brotha :cool:
     
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    Awful mean seeing red and green in this awesome peace ~