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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    The unknown love
    i grieve and mourn
    deep compassion
    seem to be torn
    but perhaps it u
    that makes up this
    love and beneath
    my heart

    You are bath in moonlight
    from above my head
    and u sing a melody
    as i lay in bed on a silver
    line of hope ur voice
    stitch a memory of warmth

    Silently i pluck flower to
    embrace your image of love
    and savior it deep in my soul
    people tell me u don't exist
    just an ocean depth of illusion
    yet i vision something more
    and feel it down to a core

    ur been like electric night
    and autumn song through
    darkness my eyez see not
    but my heart feels the
    harvest of rollin hills and
    cascading serenity beauty
    for a simple moment happiness
    ruled

    My doors await u in a place
    where i sit u on a pedestal
    of diamonds like your eyez
    and the radiant smile u pose
    i appreciate the divine beauty
    of your soul and none perfectness
    but the tame gentle tenderness of
    rapture u bring i don't claim or
    hold faults but stride on correction
    maybe now the unknown can shine
    the light of love so they know
    thy art real not just in my heart.

    A Dyamondluv Nu~wave creation
    All copy Rights Reserved 2005
    $R
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    These lines in particular were so expressively beautiful:

    "My doors await u in a place
    where i sit u on a pedestal
    of diamonds like your eyez
    and the radiant smile u pose"

    Perhaps it's time to make what is unknown, known. Very nice flow brotha.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was vibing to me loved the way you brought this.....

    Never had a love I could call on
    Don’t grieve and mourn
    The passion runs deep
    I feel the love beneath your heart
    That runs through my viens

    Just call my name and I will be there
    Never to far In a thought within the mind
    In a dream on a heavenly melody
    Your love plays my thoughts
    In vision I may not be but feeling down to the core
    A rose blooming just call my name
    The moment have begun of a simple happiness

    Just call my name
    And watch the doors open
    Within your heart you feel
    And know its real
    This rapture only just began….



    Peace
    Angel....tight flowing
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very Nice $$RICH$$

    " people tell me u don't exist
    just an ocean depth of illusion "

    An ocean indeed. What some do not know is love is deep.
    Permeate thru your pores, keeping you up making you sleep.
    The art is real, on a canvas can't capture, but the feeling is real and so is the rapture. Doors open, another close. But on love I will always count. It has a way of exceeding my wildest expectations of you. Be it unknown. No it isn't true. It has a grip of my heart. It has a grip on you. False reasons you can't make up. Admit it is true. Love has a grip and a hold on you too. If it didn't why you calling. My name. I'm in your dreams. Thinking of me, me of you in a day dream. It seems like an illusion because it may be a new thing. I don't want to wake up. If I did let me sleep. I don't want to go to work; I want to return to the deep. Caverns of you. Depths of you. Thoughts of you. Dear love.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz watz just maybe tyme uncover the unknown

    Thankz Angel
    like off the distance
    cross shore line through
    the depth of love thy
    vision maze and peer
    hearts to the unknown .

    Thankz HODEE
    that was awesome
    through u is she and
    she of u from the depth
    of love that's deeper then
    hearts can feel it's real.
     
  6. Poetic Justice

    Poetic Justice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is so nice.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sho u right poetic Justice...........thank u a million for the visit , love & support
    i'll let my heart speak for me and my soul tell the story through these feelings
     
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    Poetic Justice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your having your own reality tv show! :number1:
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If you can feel it to the core ...it's there, just not surfaced yet...but indeed it's there.
    this was a tender and loving piece, ...just waiting to arise.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed poetic Justice thankz from da heart now ur my guess star !

    Queentswana ......surely it shall come up and out love & feelings just
    can't be messured but felt and held deep within thankz sista for the
    lovin support and visit inside my vision
     
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