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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Sep 27, 2004.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    spaced in the zone
    the fear of maze
    da heart of beat
    i linger as i drift
    unto the reasons
    and speak softly
    so u know i am
    but still my mind
    roams in search of
    tomorror
    but yesterday
    is now the short coming
    today i cry out
    of past pain
    and leave my stain
    unpon the walks of
    life i promise to
    honor and obey
    with full respect
    washed from the deep sins
    i confess my loyality
    i am who i am
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    today i cry out
    of past pain
    and leave my stain
    unpon the walks of
    life i promise to
    honor and obey
    with full respect
    washed from the deep sins
    i confess my loyality
    i am who i am

    Rich....
    this right here speaks volumes
    and i understand....
    for the promise runs deep
    very heavy flow.......i hear you
    Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We can only be who we are, when it comes right down to it. Communication is the key...Loyalty and respect are precious commodities, and are cherished. Flow on brotha.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    THANKZ ANGEL INDEED SOMETIME IT'S HARD TO NOT HOLD UP !

    THANKZ WATZ....TRU BUT WE SOMETIME WARE A FALSE FACE
     
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    This is a deep flow, my brothah. Much appreciated, this to me.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz gempis my mind lately been off in a deep end
    much love sis to ya
     
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    i see the beauty and feel the truth of your words. flow on brotha
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I absolutely loved this stanza...whoa
    deep...
    I'm feeling it...

    This was a tyte read Rich!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz phenomenalwoman ya words river in deep to me

    thankz sis....sage happy u feel my heart cry out
     
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