Black Poetry : Unity

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  1. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Unity

    My honey-kissed skin

    Comes from my kin

    I’m as light as they come

    And as bright as they be



    My cultural background

    Is one of many races

    They all come from so many different places

    Every curve every line, and dip of my body

    Can be traced back to my roots



    From the proud African lady

    Whose skin was as black as soot,

    To the Spanish General Mahia

    Leading a Mexican army



    I am proud of my Black, Indian,

    French, Spanish, and German heritage

    For I am the representation of the

    Unification between nations



    I am the very eample

    Of our multicultural world

    I represent the world at its best

    When we can lay our weapons and harsh words to rest



    When we can be done with the fighting and wars

    Only then can we become as one
     
  2. Poetrymama

    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Excellent poem of pride for your Heritage.
     
  3. AHMOSE

    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ah! A writing from your soul outstanding.
    Thanx for sharing
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    simply beautiful finding self through thy history
     
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    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah BlatinaPoet4u,
    you represent unity indeed.
    Nice scrybe!

    :heart: moham
     
  6. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thnx ya'll :thanks:
     
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    there is nothing like loving yourself. every ounce of heritage running through your veins is unique. let it flow.
     
  8. Sodwn2earth

    Sodwn2earth Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oooo I loved it! That's what I'm talkin bought. Don't be afraid to stand up and take pride! So nicely put also.
     
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    I am the very eample

    Of our multicultural world

    I represent the world at its best

    When we can lay our weapons and harsh words to rest





    ON POINT WITH THIS HERE!!!!...BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN!!
     
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